I am going to begin with a confession—I’d have been horrified if you had picked High Drama over Historical Accuracy. Ideally, a book should be able to provide both. But I apply a rather stringent standard, and even a well-written book can be ruined for me if the research is sloppy. I don’t mean occasional errors, which are inevitable, but fundamental misconceptions about the medieval world, what I think of as “The Plantagenets in Pasadena” syndrome, where highborn young women expect to marry for love and class differences are a minor inconvenience and religion is rarely if ever mentioned.
Of course much of what historical novelists do is “fill in the blanks,” for we have no choice. Medieval chroniclers were notably indifferent to the needs of modern novelists, rarely mentioning such dramatic essentials as birth dates or causes of death. So we novelists must often improvise, sometimes with unintended consequences. I received a letter once from a woman who’d felt so passionate about Here Be Dragons that she made a pilgrimage to Chester Cathedral, where Joanna and Llewelyn had wed. She was dismayed to find no reference whatsoever to this important historical event and she took the cathedral officials to task for their negligence. I then had to tell her that the negligent parties were the thirteenth century chroniclers who hadn’t bothered to mention where the marriage took place. I’d chosen Chester as a logical site because of its proximity to Wales; I was able to reassure her, though, that Llewelyn ap Gruffydd and Ellen de Montfort actually were wed in Worcester Cathedral.
On a related subject, I feel comfortable involving characters in historical events if their participation seems logical and if they aren’t known to have been elsewhere at the time. For example, there is no evidence that Henry’s illegitimate son Geoff (later Archbishop of York) took part in the battle at Fornham. But we know he was very active on Henry’s behalf in the military campaigns against English rebels, and we don’t know where he was in October of 1173, so why not Fornham?
I found the discussion about Genealogy Charts vs. Cast of Characters quite interesting. Depending upon the books, I can see a need for both. When I read Brian Wainwright’s novel about Constance of York, Within the Fetterlock, I’d have been lost if he hadn’t provided a Cast of Characters, for I was not very familiar with the reign of Henry IV. The ideal solution would be to provide both for the reader. But as for bibliographies, Kristen, that is not feasible. It is rarely if ever done in historical novels and I’d expect most publishers to be resistant to it. So would I, to be candid. There is no way I could include all of my research sources; in addition to books, I rely upon academic journal articles to a great extent. Author websites provide the ideal solution, though. In my Research Recommendations section, I can highlight books that I think my readers will find interesting, and I have the liberty of adding to the list from time to time. I ought to mention here that I am not always in total agreement with the authors of the books I recommend. Occasionally the books are outdated or the writers draw conclusions I do not agree with; Marion Meade’s biography of Eleanor is an example, as is John Julius Norwich’s Kingdom in the Sun. But if books make my list, that does mean that I think the research is generally reliable and the writing itself is graceful.
Beth, I loved your comment about historical research. You are so right! Research has its own ebb and flow, and surprises can be washed up on shore once the tide goes out. I have been writing fiction for more than twenty-five years, so it is inevitable that some of my initial research has been contradicted by subsequent discoveries. Eleanor’s age is a perfect example. For many years, 1122 was her accepted birth date, but with the publication of Eleanor of Aquitaine, Lord and Lady, that changed, and there seems to be a consensus in favor of Andrew Lewis’s new date of 1124. Here Be Dragons was published in 1185, and at that time the belief in Richard’s homosexuality was in the ascendancy. Twenty-some years later that subject engenders a great deal more controversy, and writers on either side of the argument feel obligated to mention the dispute, which is surely a good thing.
Research is particularly fluid in the study of genealogy. When I wrote Dragons, I was unable to find any references to the birth date of John’s illegitimate brother, William Longsword, and his mother was unknown. Today it is generally accepted that his mother was Ida de Tosny, daughter of the Lord of Conches, later the wife of Roger Bigod, Earl of Norfolk, and it seems likely that Will was born c. 1177. Readers interested in finding out more about Ida and Roger Bigod are in luck, as Elizabeth Chadwick has written a novel about them titled The Time of Singing, which has just come out in paperback in the U. K. Moving on to Joanna, I relied upon Peter Bartram’s massive genealogical work of forty years in determining that only Elen was Joanna’s biological daughter. In the intervening years, I have seen claims that Gladwys and possibly others were Joanna’s, too. But to show you how complicated the issue is, I would cite two articles from The Genealogist. One argues that all the mothers of Llewelyn’s daughters must be shown as “unknown,” including Elen. A subsequent article in The Genealogist unearthed a letter from Henry III dated June 22, 1237, in which he refers to the newly widowed Elen as his niece, which certainly seems to prove that Elen was Joanna’s biological daughter. In the first article, I was following his arguments with interest until I came upon his statement that Elen had only two daughters, Joanna and Hawise, by her second marriage to Robert de Quincy. Now I happen to know from my own admittedly unprofessional research that Elen and Robert also had a daughter named Anne, having found this information in the Calendar of Inquisitions, a fascinating document which gave me the ages of the daughters and the year in which Elen died. So I can only repeat that we all make mistakes and we never know when a new treasure might be revealed by those receding waves.
Speaking of mistakes, I made one in my last blog, telling you that Eleanor made four trips across the Alps. Actually it was three; she and Louis took the overland route through Germany on their way to the Holy Land.
Before I respond to your questions, I’d like to ask for your help. A friend of mine asked if I could recommend any novels about Robin Hood. I’ve never done any Robin Hood reading, but I told him that I’m sure some of my readers will have books to suggest. So….any Robin Hood novels out there that Jerry would enjoy?
Okay, question time. Monica, I am sorry to say that I don’t have any U.K. trips planned in the immediate future. I was fortunate enough to live in York and Benllech, Gwynedd briefly, and I was accustomed to spending at least a month on your side of the Atlantic every year, dividing my time between England and Wales. But that changed when my mother died and my dad came to live with me; he had serious health problems and I no longer felt free to spend so much time away from home. By the time he died, I’d followed the Angevins to France and that had become the focal point of my research; the last time I was in England for a research trip, it was to refresh my memories of Canterbury Cathedral in preparation for Henry’s penance scene.
Ken, I hope you keep us up to date as Othon’s book progresses. As an ex-archer, have you read Bernard Cornwell’s Agincourt? If so, what did you think of it? I was fascinated by his contention that so much of archery is mental. I hope you have better luck with all those recycled names than I did; with so many Richards and Edwards and even Elizabeths in Sunne, I became inordinately attached to Francis Lovell simply because he was the only one in the whole blessed book! You said you were interested in the last years of the Kingdom of Jerusalem. The Osprey Campaign series has a volume by David Nicolle called Acre 1291, Bloody Sunset of the Crusader States, and Christopher Tyerman’s God’s War, A New History of the Crusades, has a section on the fall of Acre. You’re going to like my Research Recommendations page once I start to add all my crusader books!
Kristen, I’m sorry you missed my November visit to the Poisoned Pen, but it is very likely I will be back. My last visit was for the publication of Devil’s Brood, but I’ve often visited even when I didn’t have a book coming out, usually when Barbara Peters has set up a forum with other writers. I wish I were coming to the West Coast, too, Mimi. I used to make fairly regular stops in California, Portland, and Seattle, but publishers are cutting back drastically on book tours, so it is hard to say what the future holds for them. Jenny, my book tour for late July, early August is up in the Press Room of my website; I’ll be at Borders in Baileys Crossroads on July 29th at 7:30 PM; I hope you can be there. I love to meet readers, and our blog interaction has added a certain intimacy, so I feel as if I know the “regulars” already. Kelly, what is your daughter’s name? I hope she can come, too.
Helen, I would consider a film deal, but sad to say, Stephen Spielberg is not camping out on my front porch. Sunne is still optioned and the British production company is diligently seeking funding, no easy task in the current economy; there was a recent query about Dragons, but it is not likely to go very far. Gabriele, I’d warn you to keep a close eye on Arminius; he sounds quite capable of high-jacking your book right out from under your nose. And is the Dalriatan chief a real historical figure? He definitely sounds like a man who needs a book of his own!
Brenna, your question is a difficult one for me. I generally try not to be publicly critical of other writers, feeling a certain solidarity—we’re an endangered species, after all. I have reservations about Alison Weir’s biography of Eleanor, as I suspect many of you have guessed, for hers is not one of the books I’ve recommended. Regrettably, she does not always cite footnotes for the sources of her conclusions. Some years ago, she wrote a book, Britain’s Royal Families, The Complete Genealogy, in which she offered a bibliography, but not a single footnote, which made it impossible to judge the accuracy of her statements; for example, she lists seven illegitimate children for Richard III, three of them unnamed with questions marks, which was not particularly helpful for readers wanting to pursue this further. And I was troubled by some of the errors I found in her biography of Eleanor.
Just to cite a few examples: She says the King of Sicily, Tancred, was the nephew of William the Good, Joanna’s husband. He was not; he was William’s cousin. She says that the French King Philippe was so taken with Joanna that Richard immediately moved her to the mainland, “out of the French king’s reach,” since “he was a married man.” Well, no, he wasn’t. His queen had died giving birth to stillborn sons six months previously. And while Roger de Hoveden did indeed report that Philippe was smitten with Joanna, who was a beautiful, accomplished young woman, Richard moved her to the mainland because he feared for her safety—not from Philippe, but from the unfriendly citizens of Messina. Four days afterward, rioting broke out in Messina and Richard seized control of the city, “in less time than it took for a priest to chant Matins” according to one of the chroniclers accompanying him. On p. 271, Ms. Weir says that Richard met Tancred in March, 1191 and the two kings reached a “friendly agreement.” This is partially true. They did meet at Catania in March, 1191, at which time Richard gave Tancred a sword that he claimed to be Arthur’s Excalibur! But their “friendly agreement” had been struck five months earlier, in October of 1190, and this is well documented; we have the actual terms of the agreement and even a November letter from Richard in which he notifies the Pope of their accord.
I am not saying you should not read her biography of Eleanor, for she has obviously put a great deal of work into it; just proceed with caution. In fairness to Ms. Weir, I ought to say that she is not the only biographer who can be casual about footnotes. A recent biography by Frank McLynn, Richard and John: Kings at War, tells us that Eleanor had black hair and black eyes. Now this is rather startling since the details of her physical appearance have eluded us for more than eight centuries. But no footnote is cited for this remarkable revelation. I would have been fine with it had he said that Eleanor probably had dark coloring, but he presented it as cold, hard fact. And while historical novelists have to conjure up details like that, historians have neither that need nor that liberty.
Megan, I am in agreement with Elizabeth Chadwick and Ken; yours wins the Funniest Comment contest, hands-down! Paula, you made an interesting comment about medieval cooking. Should I add a section in my Research Recommendations about medieval food? I was thinking of recommending several books about medieval travel, so I guess it would make sense to expand the subject a bit. Opinions?
Well, I’ve done it again, written a blog entry that rivals Moby Dick in length. I always start out with such good intentions, too. So I’ll conclude now by saying that I fully agree with Elizabeth’s answer to your query, Carrie. The Plantagenets in particular can strain credibility, for the high drama and improbable turns and twists in their lives could have come straight from a Hollywood scriptwriter’s imagination. So like Elizabeth, I try to keep my books securely grounded in fact. And hardly a day goes by when I don’t give thanks for the Author’s Note. Now I am signing off until after the Historical Novel Society Convention.
June 3, 2009
PS Well, I’m back again, as I forgot to respond to a few questions. I asked St Martins Press when The Reckoning would be available in Kindle format, and was told it is in the pipeline, and it will depend upon how fast Amazon moves. Susan Kay’s Legacy will be issued in paperback format by Sourcebooks in the spring of 2010. Lastly, I found a remarkable website that I want to share. It is www.freerice.com, and is based upon a brilliant premise. When you visit the site, you are able to take a vocabulary quiz; each time you correctly identify a word, a rice donation is made for the world’s poor through the UN World Food Program. Do check it out, as this is a way to have fun while doing good, and it doesn’t get any better than that.
This is becoming the Blog Without End. I also forgot to mention that I am planning to add a section for my British readers. As soon as my Penguin editor sends me the book jackets, we are going to list all of my books published in the U. K. with a click-on feature to connect readers to British on-line bookshops. And I now have the publication date for the Penguin paperback edition of Devil’s Brood—August 6, 2009.
June 4, 2009